Writing Exercise – 2011 (01)

Like many of you, I’ve participated in several writing groups.  As a result, I’ve critiqued hundreds of stories – some mine and some not.  Eventually, I noticed some common area for improvement.   One of those areas is a tendency to pick vague words.  For instance, using “wood” instead of “oak”.  To counter this tendency, I developed a series of writing exercises.

First, take a look at these pictures:

Now, make a mental note of these words:

1. Statue

2. Stone

3. Religion

4. Innocent

5. Mary

6. Gothic

7. Figurine

8. Grey

The challenge is to write a short scene (50 – 100 words).  Use one of the pictures for the location of your scene.  Include a character that has a strong connection to the location.  Do not use any of the words listed above.

If you feel a full story line develop, run with it.  Some writers get their best ideas from themes in a writing exercise.

My paragraph:

The cleric glanced at the pristine marble image of the Mother.  The smokey surface had been smoothed from years of caresses from the naive hands of desperate pilgrims.  How could something with such elegant beauty hide so many flaws?  Without a backward look, he left, his sandals firm on the cobblestone street.

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Writing Aids I Would Love

We’ve had a bit of a long break since our last entry. To kick start posts again, I thought it might be fun to fantasize about non-existing (or out of my price range) writing aids.

I would love a spell checker that highlighted those words that are spelled correctly, but are not the word I indented,... wait, intended, not indented. I think every writer has dealt with this problem.

I would love a desk that holds my laptop at the perfect ergonomic position.  Something that folds small enough to fit inside a clutch purse.

I would love a user friendly program that allows writers to organize all aspects of creating a novel: family trees for those complex interconnected towns, world maps and government matrix, and an outline system that works with Word with a ribbon or header of some kind that keeps key story elements in my face so I can keep everything consistent while I write.

I would love to combine being a productive writer with house work or even better, exercise.  One word = one calorie burned.

I would love an automated editor, like the existing grammar check only super charged to accurately highlight repetition in words or sentence structure.  Better still would be great if it could tell me when I’m rambling off on a tangent or when a character needs to die.

I would love a program that creates an image based on written input – for characters, rooms, … anything.  You type, small furry animal with bulging yellow eyes and perky ears, … and an image is generated.

I would love a file cabinet & book cases that sinks into a secret wall space. Something that opens and closes with a super secure locking system, maybe something with a biometric lock.  Don’t know how much this would help with writing, but it would be awesome.

What non-existing or too expensive writing aid would you like?

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new blog

Thanks for setting this up, Anthony! The blog looks great. The keyboard wasn’t sacrificed in vain.

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Dragon-Writers.com Is Back In Business

http://www.dragon-writers.com/ is back in business … cost: 1 smashed keyboard. From a friend:
Looks really sharp. That keyboard did not die in vain.4:15 am
Well, my friend is a WordPress expert, so I’m sure he knows the site is WordPress standard … but he’s also super honest, so on behalf of the WordPress and WordPress theme team, thank you.  We’ll be posting again shortly at this URL.
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Holidays – character inspiration everywhere

The holidays are coming! The holidays can bring a sense of enjoyment or a feeling of dread, and sometimes a little of both. For me, it’s excitement. I can sit for hours outside a busy location filled with rambling people just to watch them; the Holidays bring out the most interesting people. For some this activity would be quite boring, but for me, it’s filled with excitement and anticipation. For each minute I sit in my chair enjoying my cocoa from Starbucks, Panera or any local sit-n-sip, I see potential characters; characters that I can play with.

In other words, my restful sit down becomes a game of “I wonder, what if.” For example, I wonder if the Goth girl drinking a Grande coffee with extra sugar is actually a student from the local university, or if she’s just checking out the locals looking for someone suitable to provide a snack for her vampire master. Or, how bout the suit clad guy in the back corner nursing his extra strong black Columbian coffee? His back is against the wall, his eyes darting around the room. Hmm…could he be waiting for a government contact? Was he an assassin? The later looks good to me; let’s write that down. And my personal favorite, the beautiful girl sitting next to the window enjoying her lemon poppy seed muffin just a little too much…she must be Fae; because faeries drunk on poppy seeds act exactly the same way (Personal writing group joke.).

My point? When out and about, take the time to look around you. There’s always more there than meets the eye the first look around. :D

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Dragon Con 2010 My kick in the pants

The fall is such a kick in the pants for me, especially in regards to writing. Dragon Con (One of the biggest Science Fiction & Fantasy multi-genre conventions held annually in Atlanta, Georgia.) is my reset time. The Con, as a whole, emits an atmosphere that is electrified with imagination, energy, and goodwill. A feeling that is so intense that a writer could not help but be inspired. I am inspired each and every time that I attend. I’m also energized with energy, spirit, and an aggressive need to put my stories on paper.

The convention is the catalyst for my writing reset. I’m able to attend writing panels, meet authors, editors, and publishers, not to mention it’s the perfect time to catch up with old friends from Con’s past and spend time with my Dragonwriter friends.

This year was no exception. It was wonderful, although a little crowded (30,000 +). The costumes are getting more creative and the panels more interesting. More authors in the genre I prefer, as well as newly published authors, were available to the attendees. And the Art Show! I have to mention the Art Show! The exhibit displayed art from an abundance of talented artist, both professional and amateur. The Anime, the comics, the painters, the sculptors, the jewelry makers…(OH MY!) My bank account definitely took a nosedive in the Artist Gallery.
Overall, I had a blast. My battery is recharged and I’m ready to get back on track. I would suggest to every writer to find a Convention and attend, participate and enjoy. It’s amazing how many characters you can find for your work at a Con, and how many new friends.
Life is short, so enjoy every second you can. Get out there! And write!

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Writer Beware

In “The Writer’s Toolbox” section we’re collecting links or pointers to useful sites and books. First off: Writer Beware.

Aspiring writers trying to get published for the first time are vulnerable to a variety of scams. The Writer Beware site run by A. C. Crispin and friends and published on the SFWA site, is an invaluable resource for cutting through the BS and telling the opportunities from the scams. However, without knocking the amazing amount of content on this site, Ann nonetheless summarized it to me once thusly:

Money flows from reader to publisher to author and never the other way around.

Of course you could say “Money flows from reader to bookseller to distributor to publisher to agent to author and never the other way around except for paying for extra review copies so you can do a booksigning in case the bookstore forgets to order them oh and then the publisher may pay the bookseller for shelf space and then don’t forget there is the issue of royalties versus advances…” but that would dilute the point that your prospective publisher should NOT be asking money from you.

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Dragon Writers T Shirt

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In addition to reading this group blog about our writing experiences, you can also get the DragonWriter’s logo on a t-shirt. Check it out…

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Writing Groups

Trish reported in about her writing groups … I should as well, briefly, as I am convalescing with Campbell’s chicken soup and classic Doctor Who while recuperating from a bug that has me working from home and sadly, not writing from home as there’s too much work to do. :-(

Ann Crispin’s Writer’s Workshop was a big help for me writing, but the cameraderie of the other DragonWriters from the 2002 class has helped even more. Our Yahoo Group, our yearly (and now more frequent) meetings, and occasional (for me) critique rotation have been very helpful.
The best, however, is the Writing Group at Barnes and Noble at Steven’s Creek. It’s a writing group, not a critique group, and the two 20-minute writing sessions are where much of my latest novels were written. The group has had spinoffs – a pizza night for cameraderie and a brief Publish-and-Perish group with a critique rotation – but the core group itself has been the most helpful because of its consistent no-critique, just-write, now-you-have-to-read-it philosophy of the current group leader, Keiko.
There’s also a writing group at my company, the Search Engine That Starts With a G. We meet occasionally but mostly discuss things relevant to our writing lives.
Not all writers need writing groups, but almost all writers need a writing circle, a group of friends or colleagues they can bounce ideas off of.
Where’s yours?
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Cover for BAD-ASS FAERIES 3: IN ALL THEIR GLORY

Look! :) Mundania Press has the cover for the 3rd BAD-ASS FAERIES out! :)

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